How is my story so far?

It is definitely interesting but Im not sure at this point what is going on and I am confused about the silver sink reference. I would suggest a few things so far. Abandon the word Alright in the first paragraph. It kind of messes with the flow and rhythm. Also easy with the exclamation points. And also I would not use an exclamation point at the end there. Last thing is I would cut the Pacific time ****, because you are going with a first person and maybe its important later on in the story but if time zones dont change then dont use it because when we see the time we simply see 8:30 we dont say oh its 8:30 pacific time ya? Good luck though I am curious to see where this goes